Daddy Don't You Die part 2

by melanie   Jul 3, 2005


Dad can you hear me?
I guess you didn't stay.
I wish that you could see me.
I am now getting stronger everyday....

Your baby boy is so smart.
I keep him by my side...
I still keep you in my heart.
But now your not always on my mind.

I still love you so much.
More than you could ever imagine.
I still miss your gentle touch.
But just so much has happened.

I still wish you were here.
Just to have you nearby.
That would be so soothing to my fears.
I know you would have protected me from that guy....

I still wonder if you still love me.
Am I forgotten where you are?
In your mind is it me you see?
Or are those memories just too far.

When I am sitting by myself in my room,
I see your picture on the nightstand...
I wonder if Hell is where your doomed....
Or are you upstairs with that man.

Well wherever you are...
I wanna' be there too.
And dad, my hearts still scarred.
And daddy, I still miss you......

(Tears are just flowing again....please comment, thanx)

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  • 18 years ago

    by tiny

    as good as the first one and i dont know ur dad but i bet he is watching over u and he appreciates the poems u wrote bout him. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nadine

    absolutely brilliant ending to a brilliant first part!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    as you know, i know exactly what you are going through, he was my dad too....great writing...we'll pull through this

  • 18 years ago

    by kirsty

    keep up the gd writing, i kinda no what ur going through i also lost my dad. the questions cannot b answerd. thats the worse part. kirstyxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelsey

    I really like your poem, I lost my Dad too, so I understand what you are going through/went through

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