Comments : Empty Head

  • 13 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Well with thoughts and poems like yours i don't seem it is remotely possible your head is empty. Never-the-less sweetie this was quite a brain-racking poem; but one i enjoyed reading and trying to figure out.
    [Btw if my comments and votes are late it is because of the red marker thing, it still isn't showing up in my fav's.]

    Love yah,
    - Kals.

  • 13 years ago

    by Erica

    i love this one too

  • 13 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    great poem! 25/5 i like reading your poems!

  • 13 years ago

    by Rachel Moore

    this was amazing,way to represent the younger writers;)



  • 13 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    very nice and wonderful poem and there is nothing wrong with it I love it!


  • 13 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i think you wrote three new ones as i was gone, but thats my guess because it doesn't show up on my favorites list! none do! but anyway i am only back until the end of this week and then i'm gone another week :( so sad! wonderful poem! loved it, cool idea but your head isn't empty it's filled with great thoughts of opening and closing cases, right?! lol

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 13 years ago

    by the middle

    i think this is your best poem from what i've read so far.
    i love it. it's complex and i had to thonk about it, but it's written really well and i loved it!
    take care,