LOL. Sweetie this rocked - You have such a vivid and well-expressed mind, it's amazing. :D
[I'm not giving up on being happy but one day you know - You think about just laying in bed forever and crying like a baby. Lol well i do; maybe i'm just a sad sack.]

Anyway hun-I wish my red markers would start working again. *Hmph*.
Stay safe n' strong

;;Luvoo heaps,
- Kal.

lol writers block eh:p hehe
gj

-Josiah

LMAO NICE I like the "Toppled grasses are cut away
Leaving a land bare and sore
But in only a matter of hours
Old, rough stems sprout again because the roots were never killed..."
Its so freakin true! Lol. Great work
~*Freak*~

haha omg..how did you come up with that!?! 5/5 LOVED IT! haha
*BECKY*

lol...very original!!! keep it up!
-xXx-

haha this was funny cause it's so true. hehe nice.
-A

lol That is so true! hahahahaha I really like this especially the 2nd stanza. If you need me for anything just email me to Reggaetonreyna17@aol.com, ya tu sabes. peace out! luv ya and remember i'm ALWAYS here for ya girl.