Comments : Let me Keep you

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I haven’t read any of your poems in awhile. You write the best slang poems. I have been there myself. It’s a poem that I think every reader can relate to. Take Care! Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    aw, good poem i enjoyed reading it. ill try to check out more and if theres any chance plz return the favor:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Britney

    awwl thats really cute.. but sad.. I have been in that situation before so i know where your coming from its nice to read a poem that i can truly relate to. Loved it.. 5/5! :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by NannO

    u used different style to express a thing that happens almost everyday.. so thumbs up 4 that. personally, i lyk those that rhyme, but this one was gr8, too...
    keep writing
    take care
    nouna

  • 12 years ago

    by natalie

    I know the feeling, i really like the poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Arora

    awww, you can make it a song if it was alittle longer and had a chorus...... but it is good. 5/5 <3

  • 12 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    I really liked it! It was sweet!