by XxFallenxFromxGracexX Aug 4, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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An angel falls from the sky, |
by Fallen
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hey, its not as good as your other poems, but i like it its a 5. |
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Not quite as good as it could be. The way angel's pain and all was done nicely. It has some parts that just...I don't know. It didn't help with some of the flow. Still it was good with some of the descriptions. |
by SuperJenius
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wicked transcendent write i loved it |