My Old Best Friend

by ASPHYXIATED   Aug 7, 2005


Hurtful looks,
That could kill,
Hurtful words,
Help blood spill,
A broken friendship,
Once so strong,
Best friends till the end,
Went so wrong,
Many memories,
Mostly good,
Many tears,
Could start a flood,
One bad night,
Brought it all to a end,
My new worst enemy,
My old best friend..

_-_*please comment i know its not near my best but it came out when i was really upset, and it is SO true...*_-_

Lisa Westlake ©

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Again, i can relate and i enjoyed this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    WOW~ ! ~

    Very well expressed! Wonderful! I cannot thank you enough for sharing your poetry with me. :o)

    Good job! Keep up the great work!

    Thanks again for the comments/ratings. I gladly appreciate it. :o)

    If you ever need anyone to listen, I will always be here for you.

    (((((Big Hugs)))))

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Leona

    (Excellent) poem and it's all from the heart. I love the way you put it together and how much feeling you put into it.
    Leona

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Omg dis has happened to me b4 n i so know what yr going through n i hope u bet akk mwa luv ya
    n luv da poem...xoxox i gave it a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very good poem.