ha ha lovely! i don't have to go back to school until the end of this month! *thanks god* hope you have a good year ahead of you. you should have no problem passing english though. this poem just made me smile, you did great on it! i agree most bus drivers have those problems!
Haha sounds like ur bus driver cud be alot of fun. I really like the senryu structure coz it's different to most other things except Haikus which I can't write to save my life lol. This poem is really clever. 5/5