Comments : Crazy Bus Driver (Multiple Senryu)

  • 12 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    lol funny sorry to hear that you have had a bad day on the bus lol
    and have fun at schoolz and enjoy it while you still can!

    -Josiah

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    NICE! HAHAHAHAHA I've had quite a few crazy a-ss bus drivers....they can be fun. Nicely done!!!!!!!! Funny stuff! ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    ha ha lovely! i don't have to go back to school until the end of this month! *thanks god* hope you have a good year ahead of you. you should have no problem passing english though. this poem just made me smile, you did great on it! i agree most bus drivers have those problems!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 12 years ago

    by Lemma

    Haha sounds like ur bus driver cud be alot of fun. I really like the senryu structure coz it's different to most other things except Haikus which I can't write to save my life lol. This poem is really clever. 5/5

    Em xx

  • 12 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Sounds like the bus ride from hell; Plus the craziest driver.
    Nice work sweet.

    Luvoo heaps,
    - Kal.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica V Loves U

    lol that's funny! Hey girl I'm gonna post something right now so go so we can talk! Helloooo?

  • 12 years ago

    by chfj4

    great poem, i totally love it! my little cuz lives in the us and is jus starting 8th grade soon. I've never been on an american school bus. neways, love the poem. keep it up, 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by backporchpoet

    Oh my god, we have the same bus driver! maybe not, being in different states and all, but still i laughed so hard keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Ari,

    I'm in stitches, just loved this one. Good work!

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Very cute and absolutely hilarious. Good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by keep n touch

    Oh, i'm recalling those golden days of riding the bus. my bus driver was cool and gave out candy, but one time we had a 'sub' bus driver and she looked like satan.. nice poem:)