by crystal Aug 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
|
**i changed the last 2 lines in this poem. i think it works a little better.** |
|
Very good once again you've got talent5/5 |
by Atomic
|
Whatever the last two lines were before, I must admit, I'd like this one better no matter what. It goes very well the the poem. |
by John Vlight
|
Holy crap...that was amazing |
|
very well written! and it was different, i enjoyed it! i mean it was good, the emotion, the rhyme, definately worth the read! 5/5 |
|
cool! |