Your Pawn*

by crystal   Aug 14, 2005


**i changed the last 2 lines in this poem. i think it works a little better.**

I'm laying here tonight
waiting for the dawn
I've realized it's just a game to you
and that i was just a pawn

I've figured it all out
your intentions were always the same
I've decided here and now
I'm done playing this game

you told me what i wanted to hear
but there was one thing you wouldn't do
you wouldn't leave her for me
you wouldn't tell her you were through

i see it so clearly now
i was just a fling to you
it took a friend to show me
what i didn't want to be true

but i must admit it now
i need to move on
I'll let the sun rise
i know i'm more than just a pawn

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  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good once again you've got talent5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Whatever the last two lines were before, I must admit, I'd like this one better no matter what. It goes very well the the poem.

    My favourite lines were:

    "but i must admit it now
    i need to move on
    I'll let the sun rise
    i know i'm more than just a pawn "

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by John Vlight

    Holy crap...that was amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    very well written! and it was different, i enjoyed it! i mean it was good, the emotion, the rhyme, definately worth the read! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    cool!

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