Omg i can't stop reading this poem!! i've read it like 20 times now over and over again... im very impressed by this poem... reminds me soooo much of me and my ex boyfriend... its b/c of my parents that he and i can't date but we are secretly BEST friends! good job on your poem.... much props to you! keep up the good work!

Wow greatly witten and it touched me really deep i luved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it is rare and i m glad i read it

PoEtRy is the LaNgUaGe of the HeArT

Wooooooow that was the best poem i've ever read the story is sad but it's true and i will never forget it keep up the good work

Wow boi thiz isnt tha 1st tyme ive commented on ur poemz ur truly talented once again keep up tha gud work!!!!!!!much love

Awww that was so good i loved it good job..... awwww iloved it so much!!!!

Nice poem. plz comment on mine
~heidi

Wow....that is really good. Keep writing

xOx~Allison

WOW - what else can i say!! it really bring the story of romeo and juliet in to modern perspective!! really loved it!! keep up the good work!!

Angel XX

THIS IS A BAD ASS POEM I LIKE YOUR SKILLS THERE KEEP IT UP I WOULD RATE THIS A STRAIGHT UP 10 PEACE OUT KEEP WRITING

Very good,vote my poem called secret lovers by april

You're incredible!! 5/5!

Wow you are an amazing writer!! i couldn't believe it after i read it!! all i can say is WOW...keep it up!

Omg! This poem brought tears to my eyes; I mean it was that good. You are so talented, I mean this is just amazing. Please keep writing. If you can bring tears to someone's eyes, Your doing something great.

WOW amazing i loved it and cuod reali relate to it cheak out sum of mine
*~*emma*~*

So good

That was great, words can't describe it. keep up the good work

Another good one!!!!!!!lol.. keep it up

stay chil
lizz

One word..wow..i love how you write..you inspire alot of people..and touch so many hearts..keep it up

I loved how you put this together. How modern it is. Instead of family fueds, it was about wealth and race. How very clever. It was splendid! Bravo. Of course, all of your poems have such meaning and love. Each one is great. Your one of my favorites. Cheerio and best wishes to you!

Always,
-Brittany

PS. It just so happens my boyfriends name is Matthew. Lol. I hope he can be as romantic as you!

Absolutely and positively one of the bost poems on this stupid website. Seriously. I love how you retold the story of Romeo and Juliet. Very nice