Wow i really enjoyed the poem really keep it up

Hey, i loved this, it's really good.
You're an amazing writer.
I like the way you structure your sentances, it's so powerful.

XxX CiCi XxX

Wow, cant get over just how unique and awesome this poem is. Brilliant.

Lv A, x

Paper, sorry I haven't commented lately. A lot has happened.

I enjoy this piece so much. The element of water, the condensation, the down pour ... I loved it. It was just so pure and vivid, every stanza.

I just felt your message, the pain and the agony of it all. If I may so inquire it was an agonizing pain you were symbolizing.

Awesome, as always.

5/5

Dude u're awesome

This was absolutely amazing Paperdoll. I felt the chill of the rains and the storm you were describing as I read your words. Loved the freestyle you used and how you ended it.

Absolutely breathtaking piece.