So sad.
but so good.
uv got mad skills.

WOW thats all i can say WOW!!! keep it up! can u please read and comment on my poems
~*Kayla*~
aka
~*Baby-Face*~

Wow thats so sad... but its a very good poem keep it up! u Are talented

..I feel like crying... that mom must have been a totaly ...shitty mom for a 10 year ol to do that... Now that i think of that.. if i couldn\\\\\\\'t take the pain i would probley do the same... Well very good job 5/5

That's so sad, but a very good poem.

*Blood Shot Eyes*

OMG you made me cry. this is a reakky great poem

OMG that was a really good poem i cried when i read it 2! keep up the good work....u'r goin on my favorites list

Thts great

Wow this is so sad
really well written but sad
wow
5/5

Wow a sad sad poem... makes you think its very deep

Jacs
xxx

You are a really good poet. i like your poems

Omg that was so sad. u have talent. a great one. use it as much as possible. u never kno when things change, ur ability is clear to see and u sho ur passion to write in your work. great job 5/5

Another great one...you really know how to tug on the heart strings. I added u to my fav. list. Keep on writing.

That was a wonderul read! Especially if you view it as a ten year old write it himself. My favourite lines are:

"I'll soon be up in Heaven
Way up in the sky above
And in Heaven with the angels
I know I'll finally find love"

It's so nice, there is no words to describe what I'm feeling. I was life ineffably breatless.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Left*

Breathless*

Sorry, for the minor mistakes. =)

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

So sad yet so good, how can you write poems filled with so much feeling and make them so good?????????????????? your a very talented person

Wow... I'm speechless. This poem is so sad, it almost made me cry. It's sad that those kind of things happen all the time. I love the way you wrote this poem... keep up the amazing work.