Wow great poem.. I voted a 5... would you please check out my new poem "my 2 boyfriends" it would mean so much to me if you commented and voted.. thanks a lot.. hugs!

Thats really........dunno how to describe it, like it tho

Good job i love it

This poem is vey good, I can feel the emotion in it. Keep up the good work. 5/5.
~J.T.~

Love the concept, and very well pulled off at that.

I really like the poem. Dark, real, beautiful. BUT there is some good left, it's just hard to find. And life is worth living even in this place...what the world's become...

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I really like this poem. it makes me think but its definity true. and thank you for the comment.