Strong

by XxTeArSxX17   Aug 31, 2005


STRONG

In a world of torture and pain,
What do any of us have to gain?

Love so wonderful,
Yet leaves many of us so blue,
So broke and torn in two.

Wishes that are wished,
And dreams to be filled,
So many of us think the,
Un-thinkable to come true.

Looking for the best in life,
Trying to make it without being in strife,
Leaving the pain behind,
Not thinking about the past,

Seeing through the shadows and darkness,
And allowing the light to last,
Not slowing down at all,
In this world I refuse to fall,

Getting past everything,
And all the people who have done me so wrong,
I am letting it go now.
Forgiving them all
Showing them I am the one who is strong

(C) Written By ~Ashleigh~
8/31/2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by KaYkAy

    I really liked this one.... it is really deep and makes u think abt a lot of different things... good job...

    kaykay

    r/r/c mine 2 plz

  • 18 years ago

    by Bursonater

    Its quite difficult to read like the flow and stuff, its got potential but alot of cliches. I dont know its not my favourite.

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Now this is what im talking about! the flow was awosme and rhymed so well....good msg behind the words and i just all around loved it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    This was really good although the commas didnt make sence ina few places but thats the only thing i could find wrong...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I love the message this got through however i think you should try a regulated format instead of just random i think youd do well

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