The dark side of the moon

by crystal   Sep 1, 2005


The dark side of the moon
is where the worlds fears are hidden
no one wants to think of it
and talk of its forbidden

no one wants to hear
of all the tears and all the lies
and no one wants to know
any of the hows and the whys

they don't see what their doing
they don't see what they've done
they walk around pretending
they're happy with what they've won

they concentrate on hiding
what they hold inside
they don't see that others
have the same things to hide

the dark side of the moon
will always stay the same
we'll all just keep playing
the same old game

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    I really like this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The ending line didn't seem to fit very well. You're word usage could have been a touch better but still it was a nice write. Interesting title. As I said it was a nice write.
    ~A&C

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Nice poem flowed very good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Shawn Williams

    Wow...ur 16? That was beautifully deep. Your ideas are profound. I do think you could come up with more creative word usage but other than that...it was superb. Because of its depth I had to give it a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Again, I like how it's short and simple and goes right to the pont.

    My favourite lines were:

    "
    The dark side of the moon
    is where the worlds fears are hidden
    no one wants to think of it
    and talk of its forbidden

    no one wants to hear
    of all the tears and all the lies
    and no one wants to know
    any of the hows and the whys"

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

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