Comments : Brown Whisky

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Outstanding work... great flow.. strong point

  • 13 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Good poem! I liked it a lot.


  • 13 years ago

    by Fig

    Ooh, good poem. i love all the raw emotion in it and all the dramatic language. good poem. nice flow and rhythum. well done. keep it up.

  • 13 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Wow neat poem, has a drunkiness effect. No using drugs, stay in school ;0

  • 13 years ago


    I really like the intensity vibe within this. I also like the quick flow! These lines really stood out to me:

    "Concluding with an invader
    In brown liquid form
    As we play like a wader
    In a fierce thunder storm"

    Great job~Holly

  • 13 years ago

    by Katlynn

    I really liked this poem but lets see to me it's like everything you can think about could be bad and stuff but who needs the pills because that's stupid to me that's what i think you were trying to say or how many people commit suicide sometimes. I think that's what you were trying to get out but if you weren't then that's what i got out. Great job though keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • Good...very good nice job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by John Fleece

    Why of all things whisky? but still rhyme was good, flow was good,so 4