Aww that is so sad. I can remember turning 16. I didn't do much special because as my birthday is in the summer most of my friends were on holiday, but I did have my close family...
Your poem was so touching and it really made me want to cry. I hope it isn't a true story because everyone should have someone on their birthday. Anyway good poem, keep it up.
Saddening.. ive had a few birthdays kinda like this,.. its not a good feeling.. although, ur age still says 15,.. so either thats wrong or u just wrote this out of imagination.. either way i enjoyed it.. the flow was pretty good.. up until the last line it didnt break or faulter at all.. i dont know how to improve this, or if it needs the improvement.. maybe change the syllables around and see if it fits better, or just leave it as is, for it is complete.. anyway good job and keep writing.. peace out
Well i didnt know you then so that dont count for me. happy sweet sixteen hun. i am sorry it was not a special as it should be. i know how that feels my dad didnt even call me and this year he forgot how old i was. just keep your head up there are peopl out there that will and i am sure do care about you. 5.5
Nice poem! im sorry that you didnt get the birthday you deserve. no one should be treated like that. but there are other birthdays to come, and you'll find someone to love you for you, and always be with you! keep your head up. happy belated birthday! take care.