I would appreciate it if you would comment on my poem its a true story. i would return the favor

Hey wow this is sad i am so sorry for your loss i can tell she meant a lot to you and i am sorry well thank you for the comment and yeah... love -Amirah

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM and by the way thank yojuu for voting on mine... I had a best firned who died on prom night with 3 other teenagers they were shot and he was like the guy who talked to everyone and always had a great big smile and I had been friends with him since kindergarden and that was on may 22 2005 every morning our bus goes by the grave yard he is buried in and I say hi and stuff I miss him and it hurts to know I'll never see him again well i will see him again in heaven but... u kno what i mean I MISS HIM SO MUCH and the pain never really goes away but know that your not alone!~

IM SORRY BOUT YOUR FRIEND... I NEVER LOST ANYONE CLOSE TO ME SO I CAN ONLY IMAGINE HOW YOU FEEL AND .. WELL JUST KNOW ITS OK TO CRY AND AS LONG AS YOU HAVE HER IN YOUR EART SHE'LL ALWAYS BE WITH YOU ANYWAYZ GOOD POEM I LOVED IT!! 5/5

Very good too bad it's a true story that's really sad but good poem

Hey steph i was looking at my poems when i saw u commented it no its not a true story about me but it is about a very close friend of mine if u remeber at the end where it said i havent woke up for 3 years it is becuz she died. Um...i read your poem it was awsome and well im sorry what happened, my grandpa died and i loved him the most out of my family, he was my fave person. I also had a friend die about 2 years ago 2 days after my b-day it was really hard for me i still think about her everyday but i give you wishes to hold on and make it through life. I hope me and you can keep in touch and get to know each other it would be good to have a friend on here. Here is my email address....babydang_11@yahoo.com well bye ~Shayna~

Aww dats sad xxx

Aww, this is touching. great poem. thanks for the comment on my poem :)

Such a sad poem...but it has so much feeling to it...i can actually feel the sadness and the tears...its a gweat poem...

Aw, I like this. Quite a lot. It's wonderful.

Hayy..i know how u was feeling..my best friend past away a few weeks ago due to a car wreck..good thing was she died instantly before the car caught on fire, i miss her soo much..i wrote a poem about her..its titled My BFF.. but very good and emotional poem 5/5

Never mind its titled best friends forever..my bad