Comments : Words won't do

  • 12 years ago

    by Maci

    Aww this girl is very lucky to have some1 who cares bout her as much as u do!U are a very good writer keep goin this girl will realize how much u love her in the long run!Good luck God Bless

  • 12 years ago

    by InDePeNdEnT AnD BeAuTiFuL

    Awww.....that was really sweet....great poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Aww that is the sweetest poem i have ever red....seriously it is great....i wish i could write up something like that...lol omg ive read most of ur poems and seriously as scary as it is....i can relate to almost every single one of them!
    your an amazing writter....i seriously think you could go somewhere with these poems! that how good i think they are.... If its okay with you... can i please use this poem and give it to someone....because like you said in the poem that you couldnt find the words to say to this person...that is exactly how i feel about someone! and id love to be able to give them this poem...thats if you'll let me....
    Keep ^ the AMAZING work!
    And ill keep reading! lol
    Love Paige
    xoxoxoxo
    please look and comment on my poems!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Dang this was a good poem for the most part. It should great emotion i'm just not a big fan of the AbAb rhyme but you made it work. I hope you two are still together.
    -vino

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, this is so sweet, and cute!

    • 2 months ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Thank you. Reading it, I pretty much spent my entire time cringing, but I sincerely appreciate your praise

  • 2 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Such a beautiful poem. I am sure no one in this world loves kirsty more than you.

    • 2 months ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Oh, God! That post-script...

      Well, I sure hope her husband and children do.

      Thank you very much for the kind words, sir. They are gratefully appreciated.

  • 2 months ago

    by Jenny Paradise

    This is beautiful. I love it!