Comments : Presence of almighty

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha

    Very nice and original. keep it up

    sammie

  • 10 years ago

    by Letty

    I don't understand why this poem doesn't have more the two votes or more then one comment. This is a very beautiful poem. I find not faults with it besides the I's need to be capitilized. This poem has a lot of meaning and you have placed the love the you feel for our God Almighty into it. Excellent Job! Keep up the magnificent work. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on this piece. Very paeceful feelings come to one when it is read. The message is wonderful.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Illusion

    Short n sweet

    5/5

    dont forget to check my poems . please do r.r.c

    poem 1 reason
    poem 2 deaf dumb blind

  • 9 years ago

    by despodreamer

    Excellent poem..showing d large amount of faith.
    i giv u 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by StandStill

    Beautiful poem. :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Alka,

    I really liked this and you are so right: to praise Him leads to happiness:)
    I love how you capitalized the words referring to Him. Some people don't and I think that is very disrespectful.

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by mandy

    That was very beautiful, and uplifting! The flow was great, and it made me smile, 5/5!

    -mandy :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Very original. Great flow. Beautiful dedication to our creator. Good job, 5/5. Em x

  • 7 years ago

    by Corinne

    A truly lovely poem. Thank you for your comments on my winning poem

  • 5 years ago

    by gonul

    Very good

  • 4 years ago

    by Amreen

    Gentle and a praiseworthy piece. Lord is himself benevolent and merciful and this is a good exposure for his praiseworthiness.
    Keep writing:)

  • 3 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Praiseworthy. that's a might prayer and may God see to it that your loyalty is rewarded.

  • 3 years ago

    by Augastus Black

    Great work!!! Very fair and I can feel the presence of peace...while reading this.

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    An uplifting and encouraging prayer. The sincerity of this
    prayer is truly felt..lovely!