...dude..thats a really good poem...if its based on something that actually happened then....whoa...dude..i feel for u. Thanks for voting on mine as well...and yea...the Bradleys of this world have to stick together! keep voting on my poems and ill do the same! Laters
Wow, this is really good. it makes me wanna cry! lol your poems all have lots of feeling in them. sorry about askin, i was just curious. i think its great that you can put yourself in someone elses place when you write. not many people can do that!
Deeply moving peiece, I am honest as well I love how you keep the i's lower case it really adds to the poem, I like the second staza the best it has almost a muscail quailty to it. The flow is great, the emotion strong, you couldn't have done much to improve this peice, it is wonderfully written 5/5
This poem somewhat portrays what most of my dreams are... The "one" man in my life saving, usually I'm saved....but few times I wasn't..... Love the poem though, I love reading your work.... Mine sucks i know, but sometimes i have my moments.
7 months ago
I just hope this poem is not about the girl you mentioned in most of your poems.