Lots of emotion
good use of words

Ruby

Awsome poem ill the way you write

Hey, that was interesting, not exactly my style, but interesting :)

That was good hope u never go that deep ur to good for that
anna

Very nice...very intense...I feel for you. Internal scars are the ones that take the longest to heal. Keep writing works of art and try healing a heart that's made of such hardness

Omg! i love the last paragraph! its so kick azz!!!!

Heya... why you do that? why you gotta make more scars then you have already?
I know i'm not the only one that will tell you this, but it doesn't help to do that sh*t...
Life is sh*t, so basically we could cut ourself till the end :s

take care...

Loads of Emotions, Love it ! So touching ! Keep up the fab writing hun , hope u never do that tho !

Crystal

Hey juls,

I can totaly relate.... ive been there and im still there now.... try to use a rubber band and dont carry the tin with you when you go out. just try not to do that... i love you too much....take care .... and be safe.

lylas always,
becca

P.S read my poem "Tuesday" its pretty similar to this one... love you bunches.

becca

Aww i felt this it amde me cry...anyway i jst wnt to give you this *huggles*
n i hope you can feel a lil beta kk n psl try n stop..k den bye mwa

This is one of your best ones i just wished it wasn't true

I really like it i have a friend just liek that

Wow...
its heaps powerfull

as much as im against cutting ... ur way of discribing it is incred. good

ReNeE
xox

Wow, amazing u really have mad tallent

5/5

WOW! SUCH TALENT IS VERY UNCOMMON. YOU HAVE A GIFT. i AM HAPPY TO SEE YOU USE IT. aND I WAS A CUTTER ONCE MY SELF SO I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE GOING THROUGH FIGHT ON AND IF YOU NEED TO TALK I AM HERE.

You shouldnt hide them you should let someone know..........not just us!! but still great poem!!

Wow. deep.. i like it thought. i like it a lot.. it really explains half of my life.. why i hide from people.. why i don'y like to talk to a lot of people.. thanks for writing it about ture life..

This was poem had alot of emotion in it..and i have friends that go through this and i almost did but help ur self and try to stop and keep writing

This one gave me CHILLS!!!! another great one from you!!!!!!!!!