Comments : Death at the Altar

  • 12 years ago

    by Tine

    Nicely written, really good.


    PS : feel free to check out my poems...

  • 12 years ago

    by Ariana

    Watch the grammer, but overall nice write. I don't think I understand all of it though, this is quite a unique piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    It got a little confusing in some parts, and I saw a lot of mis-spelled words, but the dark edge was very peculiar, and quite nice to read.

    Good Writing!