Trail Of Tears

by XxTeArSxX17   Sep 29, 2005


TRAIL OF TEARS

Worlds away in a state of mind,
Thinking about what made me happy last time
The joy lost that with him I have only ever found,
But then it hits me and I am laying alone in bed
Looking all around seeing him not there,
Sorrowful cries and the trail of my tears are found
Follow it and you'll find an ocean to drown

Down the hills and over the bend,
And I envision him staring back at me,
but I know it's only my imagination
with tears in my eyes once again I begin to cry

night mare night and thinking days,
him on my mind can I only ever find,
the thought's I think could blow your mind,
but this trail of tears I want you to find,
then will you only know what I think
or what's on my mind

envisions of us and the memories I thought
I think that with out him my heart is lost
I need him here with me only then can
I get this trail of tears to stop
and my ocean dry, with him I don't cry

(C) Written By ~Ashleigh~
9/28/2005

I made this poem is us history lol.. my friend go the name
And told me to make a poem off of it so I did and she liked it
So I decide to put it up see what you all think I comment and
vote for any one who does for me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel J

    I liked it.
    I thought you used some interesting imagery and concepts there, such as the "ocean of tears."

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    Ashleigh you did it again, girl. I loved it.
    Much love,
    Nana

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay i dont think this is as good as your last one granted you wrote it in a class period sometimes i think it wasnted to rhyme but the rhyme scheme was messy and stuff so i dont know and when you did rhyme it was forced

  • 18 years ago

    by Red Tears Of The Soul

    Wow, a poem that has all the great elements to make it great. A job wel done. ^_^x sorry for not reviewing earlier.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    WOA! A M A Z I N G!!!!! 5555555///10