You took the words outta my mouth. I feel the same way. We took everything for granted and now we don't have anything!! well hang in there gurlie!!

Another great poem. i really like your style. there was a few places where it didn't quite flow right but over all it was good.
crystal

Nice work 5/5 of course !!

Very nice poem once again your very talented 5/5

Great poem keep up the good work,

Emma5/5

A very expressive poem.. great flow

Wow i am so sorry for what happend to you, i could not image going through what you have been put through. you seem like am amzing and stronmg willed person and i look up to that reading this made me see how much in life i have and also how fast i could lose it and i thanks you for showing me that. i hope that you get the feeling you once had back, and remember the memories you have hold them dear and dont forget. and girl if you ever need someone to just talk to i be here for you. Ashleigh 5.5

Great poem. It made me cry. I wish it was only made up but I know it's true. I love you. Dad

Sigh... did the words u took from my mouth taste good? i watched it all happen... i dont know if u did, but i was swimming in it, watching my whole life drown all at once with out warning. its a really hard time for us right now, esspecially anyone who lost someone. and i still cant believe that we lost travis, and may have lost courtney. its all so unreal to me, as it is for most other ppl. i guess cuz it happened so fast. but anyways, good job chika! ya gotta go read my poem about the flood. its called "the day my life drowned away" i think. anyways, it about when it flooded and what happened and crap. its not all that great, but u can definetly relate to it! im gonna write a nother one about it. well anyways, 5/5
hannah

Wow, actually it was really good. i could understand it. good job

Great job flowed perfect rhymes were perfect pretty basic rhyming but hey it was perfect...

Great poem excelent flow kick me now but why did this remined me of the flow in like a dr seuss book ok maybe im wrong any how nice work

Aww this is so true. I know how you feel yet again. I'm here if you ever wanna talk. =)

The flow was good, and I liked the short verses. Great write yet again. =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

Oh wow....I loved this!
Absolutely brilliant!
The flow, rhyme scheme, imagery, and wording all worked perfectly in this.