Wow, such emotion. I love the shorter poems the give a "BAM" of emotion. Good job. 5/5

That was pretty good, it had a few parts that didn't flow smoothly, though. But overall, it was a good poem.

It was great poem just try make it rythme all the way thru then some og your poem otherwise it was great..........xoxo Rach

I love this... you keep it real n i giv you madd propZ fer that

5/5 excellent! i love writeing about this kind of stuff to.

This is an xcellent peoms, well done and i think it's gud that it was kept sort, it's way more efective that way. i read ur other featured peoms and there also heaps gud and thanks 4 reading and favouriting me i will do the same as u deserve it.
keep up the gud work
edwina
xoxo

I kno how it did. ive been there and done that too many times. im sorry but things will get better. i dont mean to say wat ever one else does that "ull get over it" cause wen u love someone enough u truly never will get over it. but it WILL get better....

great poem