When I Saw You!!

by kerri   Oct 21, 2005


When i saw you
it was love at first sight
i saw you again
and i knew it was right

you came to my window
and started talking to me
i breathed in the air
and i knew i was free

when we spent the day together
we knew it was true
forever here to stay
is my love for you

so when everyone else
starts saying im blind
i know that they willnever find
anyone of his kind

immature and funny
he makes me laugh
its weird knowing
that our love will pass

dedicated to robert m

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  • 18 years ago

    by K

    Are you sure your 13? Pretty good poem miss Kerri! Keep up the good work!!!!
    Keon aka Kwote

  • 18 years ago

    by Larry

    Really good for 13-year-old -- be more consistent with your sentence structure and rhyming -- learn how to incorporate correct punctuation into your verses

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    Kerri,
    Good Job! Keep Writing!
    ~Heather~