by kerri Oct 21, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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When i saw you |
by K
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Are you sure your 13? Pretty good poem miss Kerri! Keep up the good work!!!! |
by Larry
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Really good for 13-year-old -- be more consistent with your sentence structure and rhyming -- learn how to incorporate correct punctuation into your verses |
by Heather
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Kerri, |