Hold My Hand

by Amanda Bee   Oct 29, 2005

Could you hold my hand for just a little while?
This rickety breathing is beginning to slow down.
Please hold on tighter to this cold, frail hand
For surely there's not much time left for me now.

Spinning and shifting from this world to the next,
There's hardly even a moment to stop and look back.
Yes please hold on a while longer, for I'm a bit scared
As my existence begins to gradually fade to black.


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  • 10 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I love this poem it is sooo good!!
    I give it a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    Amanda ,
    For a short piece you have captured so much emotion in this poem ..
    A very heartfelt write ...

  • 12 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Excellent poem. again i say congrats 4 gettin 3rd in my contest...keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • That Was Really Sad Hun *Hugs* But I Enjoyed It! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by dustin

    Good poem, it was sad