Comments : Hold My Hand

  • 12 years ago

    by Anthony

    Aww, I have felt the same way once or twice in my lifetime (only 16 years) I loved this poem. My favorite lines were
    Spinning and shifting from this world to the next,
    There's hardly even a moment to stop and look back.



  • 12 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    Wow....really good one.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Great piece my always...

    Love Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Amanda, This is an amazing piece even though it is short, you have managed to capture the emotions and feelings extremely well. It is such a sad piece.

    Warmest regards,


  • 12 years ago

    by Atomic

    'Tis was short and simple and goes striaght to the point. This poem expressed everything I can't and never will have the courage to say. =)

    ( )_( )
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tinkerbelle

    To me,you captured alot of feelings in those few was a grrreeaattt!!!!!!!poem.keep 'em comin.

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely done, Amamda!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Hey! Wow, that was really well written! I liked it alot! Good job . . . 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .

  • 12 years ago

    by Ladymustang

    This poem reminds of my father's death, it is a really good poem but short.

  • 12 years ago

    by skyfox

    With few and simple words you have managed to express a range of deep emotions so effectively well done. I am keen to read more of your work now

  • 12 years ago

    by Rosie

    Awww!! it's really sad! well done. you have done a great job. sorry for the loss, i've been through it too. Rosie xXx

  • 12 years ago

    by David Wallace

    Nice poem keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by dustin

    Good poem, it was sad

  • That Was Really Sad Hun *Hugs* But I Enjoyed It! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Excellent poem. again i say congrats 4 gettin 3rd in my contest...keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    Amanda ,
    For a short piece you have captured so much emotion in this poem ..
    A very heartfelt write ...

  • 10 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I love this poem it is sooo good!!
    I give it a 5/5