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Aww, I have felt the same way once or twice in my lifetime (only 16 years) I loved this poem. My favorite lines were
Spinning and shifting from this world to the next,
There's hardly even a moment to stop and look back.
Wow....really good one.
by Ann Stareyes
Great piece my dear....as always...
by Steven Beesley
Amanda, This is an amazing piece even though it is short, you have managed to capture the emotions and feelings extremely well. It is such a sad piece.
'Tis was short and simple and goes striaght to the point. This poem expressed everything I can't and never will have the courage to say. =)
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To me,you captured alot of feelings in those few sentences.it was a grrreeaattt!!!!!!!poem.keep 'em comin.
by Robert Gardiner
Nicely done, Amamda!!!
by Just Lisa
Hey! Wow, that was really well written! I liked it alot! Good job . . . 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .
This poem reminds of my father's death, it is a really good poem but short.
With few and simple words you have managed to express a range of deep emotions so effectively well done. I am keen to read more of your work now
Awww!! it's really sad! well done. you have done a great job. sorry for the loss, i've been through it too. Rosie xXx
by David Wallace
Nice poem keep it up
Good poem, it was sad
by â™¥â€¢oOo Nikki oOoâ€¢â™¥Â©
That Was Really Sad Hun *Hugs* But I Enjoyed It! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
by Wasted Fake Smiles
Excellent poem. again i say congrats 4 gettin 3rd in my contest...keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
For a short piece you have captured so much emotion in this poem ..
A very heartfelt write ...
I love this poem it is sooo good!!
I give it a 5/5