Wow... this is how love really should be... i loved the way you potrayed your feelings... good work
keep writing

Love,
Ipsita

Really well expresed i loved it keep on writing u sure have a great telent.

Amazing poem 5/5 Really like it...you have lots of talent..thanks for sharing.

Stay cool man, keep that little hope just dont get to much, itll hurt you..
inshallah ill get my goodbye poem on the site soon, i still have to finish the last part, this will be the poem im gonna give to her now everything seems to have ended.

ill get it up tomorrow i think, you should read it then ^^

Good work here.....written quite well i must say!!! Keep it up.