:'(
Need a tissue now
love you xxx MWAH xxx

Hey Emily. hanks for the comment on my poem, it meant a lot. this poem is really sad and therefore really good. rock on!
-Suzie

It begins with a sort of doubtful hope

and ends with you being scared and let down

it's contrasting yet fitting

This poem is so sad and at the end so hopeless....i love the way you put so much feelin g into it.

Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!!
Really great...I wasn't expecting it to be so wonderfuly written, and then it was!!

Great Writing!
beth

Excellent ... touching.. !
5/5
love
amy

I really like this poem except it needs some commas and periods, that way people know when a sentence is ending and a new one begins, and of course it makes the reader pause and gives your poem a since of rhythm. Other then that good job!

~Megan~

OMG i love it emy... rah how brilliant ... very different aswell because of the layout

Nicely done emy - I'm running out of things to say OH what can i say? It's great 5/5 =)

Wow,
powerful words
a dfinate 5/5
~Emma