This is one of my favourites. Excellent Work. Keep the good poems coming!

Luv Chantelle

I think that's a question we have all asked ourselves at some point so right from the start I was intregued. I love the way you start by questioning yourself and by end questioning the person the poem was directed at.
As always Great Write,
*VioletRaven*

A question i have asked inside many a time and indeed we are never given a direct answer, questioning the reader is a nice touch to the poem, i enjoyed reading well done.

Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit

That is one brilliant poem, and has just what i feel like right now!

I know how it is

Nice poem I know how it is sometimes... any ways i gave it a 5/5
^_^

"Ill just cause pain."
that line is very strong and just leaves a mark...excellent job very well written and definetly deserves my 5/5
good job!!