That is a weird/funny poem but its awesome...based on true experience? ...anyway nice job

Man that was awesome..... really funny i thought... but then again im weird n find shit lik this funny.... great rite hun....

crystal....

Nice one..i like it!

Hey ur good at riming
take care bye bye

Great poem I like it alot

Pretty funny =-)

Hey i loved it

Haha this poem is great...too bad my best friend in the world is very emo though, but i still love her with all my heart!! :)

I'm torn between thinking this is funny and being seriously grossed out and being entirely unhappy.

Weird.

Rhyming was good, but it fell apart at the end.

Lol You guys are very creative. Well if you read my other comment I laughed out loud this time....very funny. Keep it up!

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stargazer38

Haaha Thats class

Very funny/interesting

Great poems... i can teven rhyme like that.. the end was a little funky but other then that good one

Haha I love it, that is really funny and makes me take pitty on those mean fat kids lmfao. keep them comming :)

Haha that poem made me laugh quiet alot lol nicee job it is gooood
keep up that good writting ability

I liked it.. very different but totally check out some of my poems. NAt