Comments : The Perfect Girl

  • 12 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Damn dude another good one. You are getting better.....yeah getting better as you go. Me, I just continue to write poems that make no sence but thats me. Good job.


  • 12 years ago

    by Rachael Young

    Wow Brilliant poem
    i couldn't right one better if i tried
    your a great writer
    Keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Soooo beautiful !!


  • 12 years ago

    by Switchblade89
    very nice poem...and like Matt said you are getting better....a little....through time you'll get better....but remember to write how you feel not what others want you to write...well lataz..

  • 12 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    That's a really cute poem 5/5 Nice job. I think is really sweet you wrote this poem ^_^ Take care and keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow really great one

    i vote with you for that girl to be my wife!!!
    absoloutly amazing

    great great work!!

  • 10 years ago

    by the broken girl

    This Is a beautiful poem. everything about the perfect girl, is like how i feel about my perfect guy lol. but great job

  • 10 years ago

    by Alissa aka CR4LYFE

    It great and made me laugh becuz its TRUE LMAO...i wish all guys thought like u

  • 10 years ago

    by Caroline

    Your an amazing writer. this poem desurves a 5.0 i love it lol. its simply amazing

  • 10 years ago

    by Megan

    Wow this is a great poem i really like it.
    and i love the smell of axe it smells so good lol :)
    great job :)