Damn dude another good one. You are getting better.....yeah getting better as you go. Me, I just continue to write poems that make no sence but thats me. Good job.

~Matt~

Wow Brilliant poem
i couldn't right one better if i tried
your a great writer
Keep it up

Soooo beautiful !!

xxx

AWWWW.......how cute....lol.
very nice poem...and like Matt said you are getting better....a little....through time you'll get better....but remember to write how you feel not what others want you to write...well lataz..

That's a really cute poem 5/5 Nice job. I think is really sweet you wrote this poem ^_^ Take care and keep it up.

Wow really great one

i vote with you for that girl to be my wife!!!
absoloutly amazing

great great work!!

This Is a beautiful poem. everything about the perfect girl, is like how i feel about my perfect guy lol. but great job

It great and made me laugh becuz its TRUE LMAO...i wish all guys thought like u

Your an amazing writer. this poem desurves a 5.0 i love it lol. its simply amazing

Wow this is a great poem i really like it.
and i love the smell of axe it smells so good lol :)
great job :)