Wow this poem has gotten a ton of comments, i liked it but the flow was different with each stanza, it was hard to follow the flow but overall it was an amazing poem, especially the emotion put into it
Excellent poem ,heartfelt at that ,it's like the story of my life, thanks it was a great poem, like I said if was the story of my life ,love this line:Anytime I begin to love
I get beat on once again
Another tactic I suppose
To prevent me from gaining control
keep up the great work will be reading more, your friend Tracy~~~~~5/5
let me start by saying 5008 visit..a pretty popular piece :)..
I almost forgot myself within your lines, and the sad tone of your words.
and I seriously almost lost myself between the emotions u penned down, which I can relate to about 99 %.
a very sad piece, that implies fear of the outside world..(reasonable ffear sure)
because wen the outside world..hurts us over and over again..we lack the ability to see its beauty..as we hide in out shell,afraid of loving again..afraid of being hurt..
I just wonder what I been missing while hiding ..
a thought provoking poem..worded nicely.
from the heart/obviously