Friends...Nothing More

by Eddie   Dec 24, 2005


I pray to greater power to give me a chance
Of redemption and a new beginning for me
Things changed in way I could not stop
Losing my first love and demolishing all hopes to be with her

The one that seen to linger in my mind all the time
Friends, That all we were until things changed
I couldn't hold my feelings back, destroying our relationship
Friends...Nothing more then friends and I could do anything about it

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  • 18 years ago

    by *~Lynzi~*

    I like it but some things you could change. Comment me back and ill help yah.I like it thou why were you chances ruined? Sounds sad.. i sorta went through something like that but i was on the other end of it all. my love ruined everything.So maybe i can help you with things.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is sad, and i think a little background story on this would be useful, like how you ruined your chances or something like that, but this is really good your vocab and way of wording things is right on...5/5

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