That is wow.... there is really no other words for that .... wow.
5/5

Thank you for your kind words and praise, but you are far more skilled than I, continue writing, you have a gift

Brilliant! I love the entire piece from start to end. There isn't any part of it that could be better.
I especially love these lines:

"Shadow and radiance from finish to start."

"A random occurrence of countless mistakes."

Oh and the last two lines of the chorus, just wow!
Keep it up~Holly