Very good. It was great.

Wow.
i love this piece.

I love this poem!! It's so sad it like your telling my story. Just stay strong you will get through it. 5/5

Awe...how sad...i hope everything gets better for you...

Omg!!!! ahhhhhhh that was absolutely perfect!!! its like u went inside my head and wrote my emotions down into the form of a poem! seriously....i luv u for this poem right now!!!!! u rock! chelsea

Heartbreaking.
Well done

That is, one GOOD poem, man, please read mine and comment on what you think of em...im in a lot of love pain atm

Still even now it suprises me to see how many ppl have been through this. i have too and i no how it feels especialy when u see them non stop. just remember your worth a million of him girl, your poems alone tell me that. take care you'll be ok. stay strong. tho i cant promise you u'll forget i can promise after a while the pain will get less and less. great poem and beautifuly written, heartfelt and full of passion. i can feel your pain throughly. stay strong. 5/5

Omg hun. u can talk to me any time about the heart ach your going through. hun your poems are awesome. but i think that guy deserves to be sacked for being such a jerk. there are other less mean guys in the world. and u just need to wait until u find him.

aways here for u
sonia

Great poem 5/5! I'm really sorry that its true..he ain't worth it hun!! :-)
Take care, and show him what hes lost!! You CAN make it without him!!

Great Poem loved it and I know how you feel.
5/5

Hun thats brilliant! never doubt ur ability as a writer when your upset because the best poems happen when you're going through something bad. They draw on real emotion. i loved it n the timing n phrasing is perfect hang on in there x x x

Awwwwww wow omg thiz poem is soooooo gud im amazed itz as if i cud feel wat u feel u did a gr8 job writin it i got teary eyed over here lol well keep up tha gud work!!!5/5

Wow that is wonderul....i really love it...keep it up...

Halu stranger,

Wow this was very short and to the point...it is beautiful. I love it. I'm so sorry the guy did that to you though. He is a jerk for hurting you, but did he end up picking her in the end? Awesome job once again. 5/5

Take Care-
stargazer38

Hey there beautiful tiny dancer. i've learnt now that u can never write a bad poem... u say it's bad but it never is hun... and right back at u darls... u ever need 2 talk... e-mail me... *hugs* luv ya hun don't stop writing cause then I won't have ur poems 2 come back here 4!

Nik, I'm so sorry babe! We talked about this, and ya know...you CAN live without him! I know it doesn't seem like right now, but you can, just like I can live without Dexton! It's hard... but possible!!! BE HAPPY and you need to call me!!! I'm sorry, i couldn't come over Friday, I'll talk to you more tomorrow! but remember... No man is worth your tears, and the only one who is will NEVER make you cry! (dang, i need to take my own advice, huh?!) Love ya tonz!~Kim

Aww..thts so sad...did it happen to u ??
ok ...u dnt need to answer tht tho..vel ritten..xcelent ...rock on hun !!

You write a lot from your emotions and that's why I can't seem to stop reading your poems.

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Awesome Poem, shows alot of feelings, Your and excellent poem writer!!!