Comments : The Cycle

  • 13 years ago

    by Loulou

    Very good i like it alot! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Kurt

    Good poem, heartfelt emotion, and its interesting to the reader. Keep up the writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Phoebe

    Thank you =)

  • 13 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    Can I give you a hug hunni? Your poem describes circumstances that are very similar to my own not too long ago, so let's just say I have been there. A response I would like to leave you is found in my two poems, first one called Depression and then a poem called Because I love you. Best of luck hun. If you want to talk to someone I am all ears and the Forums are great places to talk too.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 13 years ago

    by Chris


    it certainly describes a lot of the pain that you've suffered .. don't worry, i'm sure the one waiting for you will find you soon enough...

  • 12 years ago

    by Allison

    Very well written. I liked it. *5/5*

  • 12 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Genau! (German for awesome)
    You did a great job here aswell, I know that feeling all to well to, never stopping no matter how hard you try, and as if it can all keep going without you, it's sad good job :)