Comments : Enola

  • 12 years ago

    by JJ

    "I see the ripples of deep oceans
    and I wonder why she is beautiful
    but looks as if she has aged
    thousands of years ago"

    wow! simply, amazing! I enjoyed this tremendously. what a talent you are! continue writing

  • 12 years ago

    by Melissa

    Nicely done! I love this line,
    "I can smell the melancholy
    on her breath"
    Awesome! ;o)

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful piece! Lisa!!