Comments : Time can't tell

  • 12 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    Great poem,
    keep up such wonderful job

    Amira :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    I liked this a lot.. the only thing i have aside from praise is,

    and he held the sky's hand
    without an idea of how hard and tight
    the atmosphere would hold on

    i think the last part about the atmosphere is kind of overdoing the idea,.. i'd explain it more subtly.. but other than that it was awesome..

  • 12 years ago

    by Kim

    I enjoyed this poem and how open it is to interpretation :) Very orginal, well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ...I quite believe you...

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very thought provoking