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by *Unbreakable Soul*
keep up such wonderful job
by Drew Gold
I liked this a lot.. the only thing i have aside from praise is,
and he held the sky's hand
without an idea of how hard and tight
the atmosphere would hold on
i think the last part about the atmosphere is kind of overdoing the idea,.. i'd explain it more subtly.. but other than that it was awesome..
I enjoyed this poem and how open it is to interpretation :) Very orginal, well done!
by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit
...I quite believe you...
by Michael D Nalley
Very thought provoking