Yeh i really like it to ;) its very long though but i can see youve put in soo much effort gr8 job ;) keep it up

Good poem, I like the way the rhyme scheme suddenly becomes very messy and disorganised as though your mind starts racing and your thoughts turn into disarray. I also like the way this is mirrored in the layout which again is very random and messy! Brilliant! :) I'm gonna read some more of yours now

Long but it is good great job and keep it up

love always
tabby

This is like a testamony on your life, but how can you feel this way? you've bairly lived yet, you still have highschool to look forward to....yeah right, i know.
and you where right this was long and i think after you wrote this you might have exauhsted the subject, i think you have expressed all there is to express about depression.
but i love your stlye, it's really in and out, and you stay true to the title, you dont stray from the subject, thank you so much for writing a response to my stuff,
i'm looking forward to you writing back peace, for now,
i will be reading more of your life,
just using someone elses computer, so i gotta go,
phil

Great job!! you really put ur heart into it...thanx for commenting on my poem
xoxo~Catalina

I love this poem!!keepholding on... i felt that way plenty of times. dont go to hell. im not a preacher... but pick up a bible. talk to someone.... ok well thx for the comment and keep writing. ur rlllllllllly good!!!
love ya lots,
sore

5\5

Hey just to let u know... your quotes are awesome! Love them and the poems!!

Yah 5/5 frm me too.......

This is soo good i love it
(very long read it all)
worth reading
i can relatee
and it is wonderful
keep it upp!
(:

This was really more of a story than a poem, or a vent, even. Though, I'll never downrate for a vent poem, you always need to try to keep your reader interested.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 3.5

Great poem well written