Aww that is so touching and so very very true. I liked the way it flowed

Oh wow, I just had to write an essay about the misconseptions of fairy tales, after reading "The Princess Bride". So this is a really good poem. You have a unique perspective. And I love the title, it definatly adds something to the poem. Great job.

I love the ttitle of this one
it shows how people can think things will be perfect & that in reality they're not
good job =]

I love this poem its so very very true.

I enjoyed this honest and nicely flowing poem KEEP THEM COMING 5

Omg.. this is breath-taking.. i absolutely loved it.. ur rhyme was gr8, and u had amazing flow.. and ur words are so.. wow.. i dunno wat 2 say..this is so real.. i can relate (if therz anythin to relate in here :P) this deserves moe than a 5.. gr8 job
take care
NannO

Hey sammie
im nancy , nouna's friend she told me you hav this very nice poem when i read it i just went blank for all the rushing feelings you hold i don't know what to say but really thank you for writing this poem and giving us the right to read it

Great job, i reallyt liked this poem, you did a really good job and i liked it a lot, 5/5 on this poem, good wording and it kept me wanting to kepp reading, good job

I really enjoyed this it's an excellent write with a really good flow 5/5