Hey this is an awesome poem! Can't wait for part 2 & part 3.

HEY HUN THAT WAS GREAT, KOOL CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE. XOXO RACH

You can really capture your readers makes me want to read the outher parts great job!

Were you in your past life a writer? 'cause you were born with it. peace

Really good. =]

amandaxx.

Intersting start to the series. I enjoyed the descriptions.

Now off to read the other parts