Comments : Listen to me

  • 11 years ago

    by goldie

    Aw... i hope everything goes well...
    and the poem that u commented... it wasn't about me lol. it was just a poem~

  • 11 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Wow this poem is great! from wat i saw, i hope yuh moma does call off de marriage...--thanks for the comment on my poem--

  • 11 years ago

    by JustAnotherLonelyGirlHilary

    Hey great poem 5/5 i hope your mom listens to you and calls off the marrage im sorry this happend -thanks for the comment on my poem

    5/5 GREAT JOB im here for yea

  • 11 years ago

    by Moose

    I'm giving you 5/5, just for the sheer fact you were brave enough to freestyle this, not many people are good at it and its very hard. I have no idea what Disparaged means, but in freestyle, dont go out of your way to make words rhyme, very meaningfull.
    5/5

    Bryce

  • 11 years ago

    by lana

    Wow i hope she listens to you my mum has been married 4 times and all are wrong
    and i tryed to stop
    the guy she with is still wrong

    5/5 beautiful poem
    brings tears back
    hope all is well

    lana

  • 9 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Damn, u spoke the truth and u see the truth, and the truth u was seeing dat guy was no good.. U seem a caring son to your mother which you want to make her happy, and I hopr she does called it off, didn't she? U got all these word was difficult to put into great reasons.

  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    First thing I want to know, is did she marry him or not?

    This was okay as a poem, it just didn't flow very well. I didn't like this bit;

    'I refuse
    To let you
    Become used'

    Because it was too short and broke what flow there was.

    Brad