Comments : My LaSt WoRdS

  • 12 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Aiii mamiii diiz iz so zad.... Pero tu sabes que es lo mejor... bueno mejor no diigo nada, porque Tu sabes lo q' haces. Pero just to let u kno, I loved the poem, me encanto!!! Wow te guiillastes mamii!!!lol... Bueno, sabes que te dii un 5... so asta la tuya mii queriida. Sigue con tu Corazon Perdido... ya miismo lo encontraras... te lo prometo!!!!


    -Corazon Prisionero

  • 12 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Some days i may think about you and
    a tear may run down my face
    I'll remember the love we shared
    which nobody in the world can replace

    ='( Love that part... I'm sorry that things are over between you and this kid, but I promise that you are going to be okay hun. If you ever need to talk I am here. Keep up the excellent writing xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by eric

    Amazing poem and i hope things work out for you :)!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley

    Great poem! I enjoyed reading it. Check out my poems if ya like. Keep it up!!

  • 12 years ago

    by lilia

    Wow!!! this reminds me of myself sooo much. i got cheated on also, it really hurts and feel your pain. but anyways awsome job!!!!!!loved it. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Krazikoko

    Wow It almost made me cry

  • 12 years ago

    by rar

    Sad poem but i like how u write. it was a good poem

  • 12 years ago

    by The B3autiful struggle

    I can alomst relate to this poem. urgg its so true everything you said. lol, it kinda brought a tear to my eye

  • 12 years ago

    by megan

    I like your poem it's really good

  • 12 years ago

    by underahalo

    I love your poem! it's sooo awesome! and i know how hard it can be to say goodbye and i know how much it hurts

  • 12 years ago

    by sammy jo

    I really like this poem it is great i love how it just flows together 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by *Where Is My Missing Soul?*

    I say it was good
    question:were u thinking about that like that happen to u it was very good

  • I loved it. its very well written and its sad... but cute. keep it up!!! n_n

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda Martin

    WOW when i read ur poem it just really made me feel what u were feeling because i have been there too and i know how hard it is but u just need to pick ur head up and try to move on. But yeah it was a AWESOME poem and keep up the good work.
    Amanda Jean Martin

  • 12 years ago

    by Nee

    I had to Re-login to comment on this beautiful piece!!! Its reli inpiring and beautifully written. I loved every stanza
    u r inspiring!!!!
    keep it up
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x