Comments : 3 years and counting...

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Love this one.
    And I am fearful that my seed
    Shall have to perish just for greed.

    these lines are deeply symbolic. very well written.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    The last two lines are the power behind you poem. really enjoyed reading this one. Thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Christy Trenholm Schmall

    Powerful. Love the passion and message that sooo needed to be said!! The last 2 lines make the poem though it is all brilliant. And I feel the same way..gotta be about King George!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Wow! This is one amazing poem. You really made a powerful message come through in a short amount of words. Keep writing, and I enjoyed talking to you today.

    *Julie*