Hidden Eyes

by Ashleigh Skye   Mar 7, 2006


Eyes hidden from the world,
behind a cloth so dark,
hopes and dreams are beaten away,
until there isn't even a spark.

Under the thumb of the husband,
the bright eyes soon lose their shine,
glazed over from the pain they've felt,
but they don't show any other sign.

All the psychological torture,
but no where they can turn,
no one that would listen,
and places would be twice as stern.

These eyes are screaming for help,
upon the world's deaf ears,
by sitting and doing nothing,
we might as well be creating their tears.

So lets show these eyes that they are worthy,
lets show them the beauty around,
show them they no longer have to hide,
or keep their gaze fixed on the ground.

Maybe the shine will come back,
when these eyes are visible for all to see,
not forgotten behind the cloth,
but embraced for their strength and beauty.

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  • 15 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    I love the way you've picked up such a sensitive topic and weaved it so beautiful... you've got a long way to go... beautiful and touching

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    This was done a long time ago but great work now catch my eyes.

  • This is nice. the flow and structure is good. i just love thed concept of this poem great work. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    wow an awesome poem, the flow is great as well as the rhyming, you have a great talent =)

    my favorite stanza:
    ''These eyes are screaming for help,
    upon the world's deaf ears,
    by sitting and doing nothing,
    we might as well be creating their tears.''

    good work
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    A great write, and a magnificent read, i was d\so enveloped in the meaning, great job, 5/5