I'm loosing myself

by DevilWithin   Mar 7, 2006


You say you know me but you don't
you don't know that I'm living with kids
with kids who have so many problems
kids without legs to hands and fingers

you say you know me but you don't really
all you now is that I'm depressed trying hard
you know that I'm self-abusing myself lately
but you don't know the real me inside
o loose everything, family,friends

I don't know whats wrong with me anymore
I'm not sure if I ever new what was wrong
I can't stand it anymore, people,things,places
I'm starting to loose everything family and friends

why can't I just be happy and normal please
please understand me for a moment
wait no, you can't no one understand me
we each have out own problems to deal with

So here I am spilling my thoughts to you
and you have more problems then me
So I'm sorry I'm just trying to help myself
but nothing is helping I'm sorry again

(C) DevilWithin

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  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Hey, this poem was really good! there was a lot of emotion, and u have expressed ur feelings very well. great work, 5/5, and thanku for the comment :)
    take care hun xxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by jerald

    I like this poem. its not alot of rhyming but i can really feel how ur feeling

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Im not gonna vote right now, if you fix the grammar and stuff it'll be even better... and if you do just a little more than that and bump up your vocab some... you'll be awesome, it'll be awesome
    keep up the great work tho
    amanda

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