Comments : 1 Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awww, This is sad. Very good job though, Love it how you kept repeating that line "1 Rose for the wife"
    Very well done 5/5

    - natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Another great poem.

    "1 Rose for the wife
    A look of shock finally hits
    You realize he isn't here anymore
    Untouchable, out of reach
    Not able to see nor touch his face"

    that was my favorite part.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    WOW! UNBELIEVABLE! OMG! im speechless! I LOVE IT!! I LOVE THE WAY IT WAS WRITTEN!! keep it up!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by †Undone♥

    This si soo good. Surely 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Oh wow this put me to tears. you have such a way with words. i love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    Love it, its so sad but good work ... keep it up