So called Happiness

by alwaysremeniceus   Mar 14, 2006


In that moment,
blaming herself is the only thing on mind,
its times like this,
she wish things can rewind.

So selfish,
the selfish self that she is,
but is there anything wrong,
with wanting to be with the one you love and a kiss?

Things begin to go downhill,
they both know things will end soon,
the impossible can never be possible,
regardless of the countless nights up staring at the moon.

It'll all be over now,
she is just waiting for him to disappear and leave,
he asks her if she want him or happiness,
she knows no matter what happiness will no longer be.

So now they may fall any step now,
their love is still being overpowered by this blackness,
but those aren't even choices; he is what makes her happy,
how would things be without him, and with this so called happiness?

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  • 18 years ago

    by bluehun

    Forget spelling errors etc etc its not an exam you are doing.
    i found this a good write,very sad,and sent a messagehow you were/are feeling so all in all 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    This was really quite sad in a way but otherwise a pretty good poem xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    I have always been pretty harsh on judging work so please don't be upset.. Your images were nice but kinda scrabbled and the tense of some words needed to be changed. that and some of the message was abit scattered but it was a good attempt. Please continue to try and harness the message first. Ok take care...

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I loved the word choice most of all. Second thing I liked seemed to be that the message seemed clear. But what I really didn't like was the minor spelling and grammar errors. After the first couple, it sort of took something away from the poem.

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